Hey guys check out my tracks.

Hey guys im new to Starting Producers and im glad and proud to be in it. This is a very nice community. Well lets get to the point check out some of my tracks enjoy
http://soundcloud.com/cendrim
Thanks for your time
-Cendrim

Made another track here
http://soundcloud.com/cendrim/david-puentez-ft-max-c-things

Hey dude, i listened to your songs and first off all:
Call me: AWESOME CHORDS.

Really great! Muchhh love! I really like it! But of course you want to know what i think you should improve, so:

It is a bit boring to listen to, you should change something. Everything between 1:01-1:18 should be made a little bit quicker, because that is when i think After that it begins to sound cool again. Also you should change the end, it is a little bit random. Like im listening to the music when suddenly BAM the music stops
Overall: 8/10!

thanks man and ill try to change it up a bit

Working on the track it will be up in a min

here it is my reloaded track on call me
http://soundcloud.com/cendrim/cendrim-call-me-reloaded

check out another one of my songs short version
http://soundcloud.com/cendrim/mr-saxobeat-cendrim-remix

I think what Derp thought - correct me if I'm wrong - saying that you should put more variations in your track was about the main melody, because it's just the same riff with different synths playing it!

I suggest you to take a progressive track you love from a known producer (Levels - Avicii, Deadmau5 tracks or even Resurrection - Axwell's Re-Cut Club Version), put it in your DAW software and try to see the track's construction; how many bars for the main parts, where does breakdown drops etc...
Then you'll have a more structured track!

- Brasart.